Revising

As your team works writing the front matter of your report, and revising the body, I'm at work revising the article I wrote about management and writing in the naval nuclear reactors program. The reviewers liked the article, but wanted some revision. They wanted to see more of a theoretical connection between my observations and other scholarship in the field. And they wanted to see a more critical approach--at times they felt the article painted a picture of the organization as a utopia, which it certainly isn't.

So I'm back to work on the project, reading and revising!